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Tuesday, August 01, 2006

"
'cos i know you'll be reading

On the phone

I look up, a smile lights up my face
I pause, listen and my smile grows wider
I look for a quiet corner

Something warm uncoils from the bottom of my belly
It spreads throughout my body
my feet, my hands, my face
I feel hot and cold

The distance between us disappears
your hand holds mine
I feel safe, I feel loved
I'm on the phone with u
"

'cos i know you'll be reading

On the phone

I look up, a smile lights up my face
I pause, listen and my smile grows wider
I look for a quiet corner

Something warm uncoils from the bottom of my belly
It spreads throughout my body
my feet, my hands, my face
I feel hot and cold

The distance between us disappears
your hand holds mine
I feel safe, I feel loved
I'm on the phone with u

18 comments:

Pilgrimage to Self said... Best Blogger Tips

Lovely.

Anonymous said... Best Blogger Tips

Whaow, i guess u're hopelessly in love.

Ore said... Best Blogger Tips

Sounds like it! Enjoy it. There's nothing like it!

Anonymous said... Best Blogger Tips

Lovely poem.

dont mean to pry, just wondering. Is he across town, across the Niger, across Third mainland bridge, across the Mediterranean or across the Atlantic?

Belle said... Best Blogger Tips

i love that feeling.............

who is he? Spill it lady!!!

Biodun said... Best Blogger Tips

ok girllllllll we have been waiting for gist on this guy now for a minute now, so spill, love the poem!

Adunni said... Best Blogger Tips

Thanks peeps i was just trying out my hand at poetry now ...........
ok! ok! You're all right. It is a Man and I'm hopelessly gone i tell u.
I'm trying to enjoy it o but im just scared. I'll try and give the gist soon.

Anonymous said... Best Blogger Tips

Lovely poem! You amaze in many different ways. Wish you luck!

Ife said... Best Blogger Tips

Cool lines. I love them

Gbemi's Piece said... Best Blogger Tips

Isn't that such a wonderful feeling??? Your words are the truth. Enjoy it and relish it!!!

Belle said... Best Blogger Tips

hey girl... waiting on the gist!

Aba Boy said... Best Blogger Tips

Awesome...loved it

albibie said... Best Blogger Tips

Beautiful

Dilch said... Best Blogger Tips

I like the poem and I can't wait for the jist, go on spill.....

Onada said... Best Blogger Tips

awwwwww

TeeKay said... Best Blogger Tips

Awwww, there's nothing like being in love, the greatest feeling ever.

NaijaBloke said... Best Blogger Tips

Hahaha..just reading ppls comments just got me laffing..
Anyway Anti Adunni spill the gist o.

Nneka's World said... Best Blogger Tips

Lovely poem, and waiting for the giste......